“...this could damage to human’s health【cause damage to human health】...”
OR:
“...this could damage to human’s health【have a negative impact on human health】...”
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“...governments can【could】establish a really effective legislation【really effective legislation】...”
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“...[In terms of our diet in Taiwan,] I don’t think we have ranges or limits【I think the range of food(s) eaten is not limited in any special way】...”
OR:
“...[In terms of our diet in Taiwan,] I don’t think we have ranges or limits【I think the range of food(s) eaten is not peculiar to Taiwan】[because many other countries in South East Asia have a similarly diverse cuisine] ...”
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“...[at some restaurants,] the food you order is going to be load with fat【loaded with fat】...”
OR:
“...[at some restaurants,] the food you order is going to be load with fat 【is going to have a high fat content】...”
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“...[I think Taiwanese people are well informed about what their diet contains, especially] if they have allergic【an allergy.】...”
OR:
“...if they have allergic【an allergic reaction to specific ingredients】...”
OR:
“...if they have allergic【are allergic.】...”
OR:
“... if they have allergic【are allergic to a particular additive】[, such as an artificial colouring] ...”
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“...one part of the element【one element in this situation】...”
OR:
“...one part of the element【one part of the problem】...”
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“...the cooking of styles【the cooking styles】...”
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“...[in terms of the increasing popularity of foreign dishes in my country,] people can accept this kind concept 【this kind of food and the concept of importing it from overseas】...”
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“...In order to gain more benefit【increase benefits】[in terms of profit and productivity,] numerous farmers are using chemicals ...”
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“...using insecticides, which can be very harmful for the human kinds【for humankind】...”
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“...in Taiwan, it is difficult for the law to be against.【to prohibit activities like this.】...”
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“...they can get more benefits【the benefits would be far greater】...”
OR:
“...they can get more benefits【they would benefit more fully】[from this situation] ...”
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“...I think the single dish can’t【a single dish cannot】[represent the cuisine of Taiwan] ...”
OR:
“...I think the single dish can’t【no single dish can】[represent the cuisine of Taiwan] because it is too different【diverse】...”
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“...owing to different group living in this area【owing to the fact that different groups of people live in this area】...”
OR:
“...owing to different group living in this area 【owing to the different groups of people living in this area】[, an enormous range of different dishes are cooked] ...”
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“...I think foreign food is much healthy【much healthier】[than other food] ...”
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“...In my opinion, it’s vitally important for the government to legislate at food labelling【to legislate against inadequate food labelling】...”
OR:
“...In my opinion, it’s vitally important for the government to legislate at food labelling【to provide legislation that ensures adequate food labelling】...”
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“...if we understand the contains in the food【the contents of the food】...”
OR:
“...if we understand the contains in the food【what the food contains】...”
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“...Chinese food usually contain【food usually contains】a lot of ingredients; therefore it could be nutritious【a lot of fresh ingredients; therefore it can be nutritious】...”
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“...[this highly seasoned food often contains a lot of salt] which could cause a healthy problem【a health problem】...”
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“...I think people and the government should be laws【should put in place laws】[to prevent this] ...”
OR:
“...I think people and the government should be laws【should create laws】[to prevent this] ...”
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“...[we can discuss this situation] from the two aspects【from two points of view】...”
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“...the human body will suffering from【will suffer from】[ingesting a lot of synthetic ingredients] ...”
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“...this will be severe damage to the earth【this will cause severe damage to the earth】...”
OR:
“...this will be severe damage to the earth【this will severely damage the earth】...”
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“...people today emphasis on the health【place emphasis on health matters】...”
OR:
“...people today emphasis on the health【emphasise health-related issues in their lives】...”
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