“...I would like to go to Eiffel Towers【the Eiffel Tower】, which is located in Paris ...”
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“...not many people can go to there【go there】...”
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“...I think the to there【go there】...”
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“...I think the historical building will become more famous【historical buildings will become famous more easily】[than other forms of architecture] ...”
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“...I think the historical building will become more famous【a historical building is more likely to become famous】[than another form of architecture] ...”
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“...I think everyone will say 101【would say the Taipei 101】is the important modern building in Taiwan【the most important modern building in Taiwan】...”
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“...The architect want【wanted】to challenge the highest building in the world [, showing people] to how it incredible to be done【how something that seemed impossible could be done】...”
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“...[showing people] to how it incredible to be done【that architecture can be truly incredible】...”
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“...One of the energy use in Taiwan is power【In Taiwanese buildings, energy is used in different ways; for example, electricity is used for air conditioning or gas is used in some buildings to heat water】...”
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“...the energy use in the modern building are water and power give light【forms of energy typically used in a modern building include electricity to power the lights, but it also takes a great deal of energy supplying a household with clean water】...”
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“...When it come【comes】to environmental issues, I believe architects can also play【can play】an important role by building some energy-saving equipment onto the building 【by incorporating energy-saving equipment in their designs】...”
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“...In my opinion, old building【an old building】can attract visitors by its reputation of historical significance【because of its historical significance】...”
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“...historic architecture has elements reached a balance【strikes the right balance in terms of function and form】 ...”
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“...With the increasing of populations【With the increasing population】 [, there have been new pressures on land due to the need for buildings] ...”
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“...With the increasing of populations【With increases in the population】 , _ ...”
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“...With limited land and increasing of people 【With limited land to build on and a growing population】, people are building taller structures ...”
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“...With limited land and increasing of people 【A scarcity of land available for development coupled with a growing population has meant that】 people are building taller structures ...”
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“...An example of a traditional culture city【a traditional, cultural city】is Tainan ...”
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“...An example of a traditional culture city【Tainan is an example of a traditional, cultural city】...”
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“...When people living in the new buildings【move to a new building】, they need to get used to the emergency procedure 【to familiarise themselves with the emergency procedure】[so that they know what to do in the event of a fire or even an earthquake] ...”
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“...The architecture [of the future] might pay more attention to the design of the urban【the overall design of urban spaces】...”
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