筆記_Speaking_Exercise

“...In my opinion, use exercise machines【using exercise machines】[offers certain benefits] ...”

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“...Exercise machine usually has【Exercise machines usually have】some electronic devices which could know how much calorie you consume【which can tell the user how many calroies they have burned】...”
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“...which could know how much calorie you consume【which provide information to the user, perhaps including how many calories they have burned through the exercise】...”

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“...but people just can repeat their actions repeatedly【can only repeat actions】
[when using exercise machines, and some people would consider this uninspiring] ...”
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“...but people just can repeat their actions repeatedly【can only repeat actions, movements and positions】
[when using exercise machines, and some people would consider this uninspiring] ...”

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“...[the experience of exercising in a gym] is different from nature environment【exercising in a nature environment】[, such as a national park] ...”

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“...[some companies in the fitness industry do promote themselves;] they always offering the coupons【they typically offer coupons】[to potential new customers, encouraging them to join the gym] ...”

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“...In my opinion, I disagree with the schools to open their facilities【I do not support the idea that schools should be make their facilities open】to members of the public ...”
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“...In my opinion, I disagree with the schools to open their facilities【I disagree with people who say that school should make their facilities accessable】to members of the public ...”

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“...there are certain facilities have to very expensive【which are very expensive】[to buy or build and then maintain] ...”
OR:
“...there are certain facilities have to very expensive【which are bound to be expensive】[to acquire and maintain] ...”

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“...in Taiwan most parks have no function【have no facilities】[dedicated to exercise] ...”

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“...mostly, parks just only for family getting together【are only for families to get together】...”
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“...mostly, parks just only for family getting together【parks are often sed to meet friends or for a family get-together as opposed to focused exercise】...”

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“...There is a word:【There is a popular saying,】[“no pain, no gain”] ...”

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“...By the healthy checks,【Though health checks,】[society might] reduce the chances of the severe damages to the human body【serious harm to the human body being caused】[by poor diet or a lack of exercise] ...”

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“...Also, on the other parts,【in other respects,】
[it is arguable that the government has a duty to ensure public well being] ...”

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“...I believe it’s vitally important to do the health checks【to carry out these health checks】...”

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“...some people will disagree to do the health checks【disagree with doing these health checks】...”
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“...some people will disagree to do the health checks【disagree with carrying out these health checks】...”

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“...I think the best way to enjoy exercising is exercise with your friends【is to exercise with your friends】because you will forget you are exercise【are exercising】...”

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“...As for my knowledge,【To my nowledge】...”

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“...[people may begin exercising regularly] to become more younger【to become younger -looking】...”
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“...[people may begin exercising regularly] to become more younger【in order to feel younger, or to seem younger to other people】...”

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“...[people may choose to exercise] to go against the ageing【to counter the ageing process】...”

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“...if we want to go to a fitness club, it must be paid money【we have to pay】...”
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“...if we want to go to a fitness club, it must be paid money【we need to pay the membership fees】...”

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“...a fitness club can【could】give the customers the space to customize their fitness goals and needs【to customize their fitness programme to meet any specific needs the client has】...”

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“...[to eat more healthily, people can] decrease the meat in every meal【reduce the amount of meat eaten every meal】...”

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“...[if you don’t choose a method of exercise which suits you,] you may feel boring【bored】...”

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“...you must to prevent injury【prevent personal injury】
[by knowing your limits and not pushing yourself too far in the gym, or while jogging outdoors] ...”

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“...there is a lot of chance to get hurt【there is a strong likelihood that you will get hurt】...”

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“...it is not easily to find【it is not easy to find】a gym or fitness club in the community ...”

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“...Nearby my home【Near my home】there is a riverside park ...”
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“...Nearby my home there is a riverside park 【My home has a riverbank park nearby】...”